Critical Reflection

A good learning journey is to learn from your own mistakes. Writing skills have always been a hinder to my daily written. Even though writing skills are not of my proficiency, I would still make it a point to write down the idea that I would want to deliver through. By doing so, I could read the sentence repeatedly and make the necessary amendments. However, I may not spot the mistakes in my sentence as revised sentence may sound error-free but the is some sentence structure fragments. Therefore, after trying to correct the mistakes I wrote, will then seek help from my team members for any advice on changes after their reading the rephrased sentences. 

While focusing on the writing skills, I realized how grateful I am towards my team member for giving me the guidance and correcting the necessary sentences or phrase. In the process of project meetings and rushing out the drafts for submission, or even the project final presentation, they would try to help me and strive for the best as a team. Being extremely grateful for this experience and glad to have met wonderful teammates to help each other. Able to write in the form of 7 Cs really took the challenge of daily used English to the next level. Teamwork really plays an important role in the submission and drafting of a proposal. To help each other while working on a project, you should first criticize your own mistake in the process, to achieve a faultless outcome and able to have the ability to correct the other members. 

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  1. ShermaineDecember 2, 2017 at 3:50 AM

    Hi ZhiLing,

    Glad to see that you are working hard on improving your writing styles! Hope to be able to work together on a project again!

    Cheers,
    Shermaine Tan

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